Sunday, July 26, 2009

Concrete Distopia ( reversed abbreviation. )

Back in the

concrete

the last thing

I feel is relief

all the things I forgot

I remember now

and it's a sea of

maybe maybe

probably nots

that I'm swimming

through sluggishly

because there's a goddamn

sickness in all the

suits here walking by

all the mismatched

sloppy suits that

drudge through

broad asphalt

but it will be over

one day and I'll

leave behind all

those demons

that pour salt onto

my eyes

1 comments:

  1. brutal, very brutal

    I like your writing, I'm linking you to my site, could you link mine if you like it, of course. I don't do poetry so to speak but I'm a big fan of alliteration.

    http://lifestyleguides.blogspot.com/

    Jollyroger

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